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Itome Hikaraku

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PostSubject: The Prince's Technique List    Tue Nov 18, 2014 5:51 pm

Name: Mole Hidden In The Ground
Class: 4
Type: Mana
Sub-Type: Defensive
Specialties: Elemental(Earth)
Availability: Generic
Requirements: Level 2 Earth Element
Description: After the user channels Earth magic throughout the body, they can sink through the ground in a fashion similar to a mole. The hole made is a little bit larger then the user, and can be closed after it they sink under ground. Of course, the user will still need air, so they cannot stay under ground forever, meaning in two of the user's posts, they must leave. 1/4th control is the user's speed.
Training: 300 words
Cost: 30 Mana

Name: Dawn Turtle
Class: 3
Type: Both
Sub-Type: Offensive and Defensive
Specialties: Martial Arts
Availability: By Request
Requirements: Martial Arts- 75, 400 Strength
Description: By forcefully striking the air, Kakarotto creates a wind shaped in the form of a shell(hence the name). The shell is 5x5 meters, and can deflect and lift anything 600 pounds and under, throwing them 25 meters. If the opponent is hit by the shell, it does blunt force damage. Moves at Kakarotto's speed.
Training: 400
Cost: 50 Stamina

Name: Gunshot
Class: 4
Type: Mana
Sub-Type: Offensive
Specialties: Wind
Availability: Generic
Requirements: Elemental Level 2
Description: When the user focuses their mana, they unleash a sphere shaed gust  of wind the sized of a baseball from the mouth. It can easily pierce through people, unless they have some sort of armor, of course. 3/4th of user's Control stat.
Training: 250
Cost: 30(Mana)


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PostSubject: Re: The Prince's Technique List    Tue Nov 18, 2014 6:01 pm

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Name: Mole Hidden In The Ground
Class: 4
Type: Mana
Sub-Type: Defensive
Specialties: Elemental(Earth)
Availability: Generic
Requirements: Level 2 Earth Element
Description: After the user channels Earth magic throughout the body, they can sink through the ground in a fashion similar to a mole. The hole made is a little bit larger then the user, and can be closed after it they sink under ground. Once under the ground, the user can sense the opponent through vibrations in the ground. Of course, the user will still need air, so they cannot stay under ground forever.
Training: 300 words
Cost: 30

For Requirements put Elemental - 50 and Earth Element.

Make a different earth technique for detecting vibrations

For Cost, please put 30 Mana or 20 Mana and 10 Stamina, 30 alone doesn't tell what it is costing.

Speed should be about 1/4 or 1/5 of Control stat and finally, how many posts can the user stay under the earth without falling unconscious from lack of oxygen?

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Name: Dawn Turtle
Class: 3
Type: Both
Sub-Type: Offensive and Defensive
Specialties: Martial Arts
Availability: By Request
Requirements: Appropriate Martial Art level
Description: By forcefully striking the air, Kakarotto creates a wind shaped in the form of a shell(hence the name). The shell is 10x10 meters, and can deflect and lift anything 600 pounds and under, throwing them 25 meters. If the opponent is hit by the shell, it does blunt force damage. Moves at Kakarotto's speed.
Training: 400
Cost: 50

Requirements: Put Martial Arts - 75 and probably some kind of strength, maybe 400-500.

Secondly, 10x10 meters is WAY too large, that would be closer to high Class 2 or Class 1, make it about 4x4 or 5x5 meters.

Lastly Cost, how much mana, how much stamina? And if it requires both mana and stamina then you need Wind Element

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Name: Gunshot
Class: 4
Type: Mana
Sub-Type: Offensive
Specialties: Wind
Availability: Generic
Requirements: Appropriate Martial Arts level
Description: When the user focuses their mana, they unleash a sphere shaed gust of wind the sized of a baseball from the mouth. It can easily pierce through people, unless they have some sort of armor, of course.
Training: 250
Cost: 30

Requires Wind Element first of all, as well as Martial Arts - 50. Requires Elemental - 50 to use as well. Put speed into it or else I'll assume it moves at speed 5 and the Cost, how much mana, how much stamina?
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PostSubject: Re: The Prince's Technique List    Tue Nov 18, 2014 6:35 pm

Fixed
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PostSubject: Re: The Prince's Technique List    Tue Nov 18, 2014 6:44 pm

Looks good to me, approved.
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PostSubject: Re: The Prince's Technique List    Wed Nov 19, 2014 5:13 pm

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Name: Dawn Turtle
Class: 3
Type: Both
Sub-Type: Offensive and Defensive
Specialties: Martial Arts
Availability: By Request
Requirements: Martial Arts- 75, 400 Strength
Description: By forcefully striking the air, Kakarotto creates a wind shaped in the form of a shell(hence the name). The shell is 5x5 meters, and can deflect and lift anything 600 pounds and under, throwing them 25 meters. If the opponent is hit by the shell, it does blunt force damage. Moves at Kakarotto's speed.
Training: 400
Cost: 50 Stamina

Too much wind manipulation for a technique that doesn't even use wind as an element. v.v Denied. Tone it down significantly. You should not be able to create a force of wind that powerful using the force of your fist alone. You would need Wind as an element. v.v
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